70 Years Past Midnight - Part II

.. continued 


Flag-lowering is a daily observance at the Wagah Border, open to the public this day.

 On our view of the gate:

   l --- Bharat ------------------------------------------------- India --- l

A crowd gathers on either side - Eleven thousand are provided seats.
Not unlike a cricket match, except everyone leaves satisfied.

(Communalism - it caused two parts of a whole to drift apart. 
Seven decades later and to this day, sweets are exchanged across the frontiers.)

With measured steps they neatly stride, a silver blade in hand upright. 

Handmade badges turned to gallantry ribbons.. 
                                         a soldier’s uniform is always lined.

revered fabric     
draped across two sturdy palms 
              nation in his arms


~Late Evening TV Coverage of the morning’s events - The Prime Minister’s speech~


A crew stands on nine years of sandstone - A bird’s view from afar.      

Hailed by music
      he walked into a constellation of schoolchildren 
‘Where the mind is without fear and the head is held high’.

Acceptance is the first step towards change: 
Violence in the name of faith is unacceptable.

"In the New India, the biggest strength is democracy. 
But we cannot reduce ours to mere ballot boxes. Our resolve is to have a democracy where people are not driven by the system, but the system by the people."


 I watch the proceedings 
many states away 

                nation in our hopes

--------------------------------------------------------------------
Jai Hind

Tricolour lighting in my city:   
www.youtube.com/watch?v=herkuupDnAo

Internationally: 
www.ndtv.com/offbeat/independence-day-2017-indian-embassies-light-up-in-colours-of-the-tricolour-see-pics-1737756
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Dietrich Avatar
August 25, 2021 at 2:29 PM
I am reading what Jan commented to MY comment on this long ago. I certainly agree with her that you are a talented young lady.
Jain Avatar
October 7, 2019 at 8:29 PM
A great haibun Sneha. Jai Hind. This is really a great poem. I could feel patriotism in your poem. Mixture of literary devices suits your creative writing. Let's be in touch.
Vangaveti Avatar
February 23, 2019 at 8:25 PM
"revered fabric draped across two sturdy palms nation in his arms" - a must read by children and of course everyone :)
Lamoureux Avatar
March 9, 2018 at 8:48 AM
I appreciate your sentimates and admire your articulation. As poets we have the power to inform and entertain. You have hit both marks with the skill of an archer.
Pandit Avatar
January 31, 2018 at 5:13 PM
Just as good as part I, you tell a wonderful story of historic significance..I see the gate..I feel the celebration..great work, Sneha.
Callus Avatar
January 31, 2018 at 3:25 PM
Well done, Sneha! You merit a warm round of applause:) Always be proud of where your roots come from! Regards // paul
Allison Avatar
January 31, 2018 at 3:03 PM
Bravo Sneha I thoroughly enjoyed your poem you have such a love for your country - it would be wonderful to see this in print in your country:-) hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
January 31, 2018 at 1:31 AM
You have done a majestic job in the complete work of your haibun, Sneha. You are a true credit to poetry and to India.
Allison Avatar
January 31, 2018 at 3:02 PM
Well said Andrea Sneha is an incredibly talented young lady and it is so wonderful to see her blossom and share her wonderful work on PS:-) hugs jan xx
Cunningham Avatar
January 30, 2018 at 11:59 AM
Brilliant work Sneha. Regards Tom.
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January 30, 2018 at 9:23 AM
Great haibun about your country Sneha...
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