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70 and the new me

New Year's DAY 2024 I woke up this morning to find I am now ten plus three score, With thoughts galore, About this being a false score, And wondering what is in store, Now that 70 is the new me for sure, With a new decade I need to explore, And no way back to the one before. But before I finish here, There is one more thought I am keen to share, That I think I am happy to be here, In such rarified air, That few get to share, And while I will be taking my time to explore, In no hurry to leave, now that I am here, If I should wake up in 2034, With a further decade to explore, I know I will be grateful for sure, Especially if I find you have joined me there, To share the view in the more rarified air, That few get to share.

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Date: 1/1/2024 4:28:00 PM
Time’s such a strange thing, David. A decade hence seems like eons but a decade gone seems like a finger click. Hope to say ‘Hi’ in a decade… or two. Enjoyed. Terry
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Date: 1/1/2024 5:54:00 PM
Appreciate your reply Terry. I have a nephew who has mental health issue, and lives alone. His parents have done their best but every day a struggle. I am lucky indeed to be still married and 3 children who all are home for Xmas, plus grandson. Our eldest lives in our street. Also lucky to have found poetry soup. Take care David in NZ

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