Brian Davey Poet Verse

6 To 8-Sunlight In Your Eyes

Sunlight in Your Eyes



               Shimmer sea jaded foam green sparkling fire

                    Alive, a soulfull of surprise dancing in the sunrise

                         Mesmerizing stare glowing with the purest energy

                              Vision of the heavens orbs of cosmic green stars

                                   All from the way she tilted this day to look at the sky

                                        The sun goddess reflection these eyes to so fall in love...


                                              
                                                                                         10/24/17
                                                 Written for contest: "6 to 8" Hosted by: Netted Onclaud 
    
                                                           WON 5th Place in Contest Reults

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Nette Onclaud October 31, 2017 at 4:06 PM what a lucid write worthy of a place in the contest, brian... well done and thanks for participating.. best of congrats! Brian Davey October 31, 2017 at 4:40 PM Thank you for believing that it is worthy enough and for putting on a wonderful contest!

Subimal Sinha-Roy October 31, 2017 at 12:56 AM Congratulations, Brian on your win. Brian Davey October 31, 2017 at 3:48 AM Thank you so much

Eve Roper October 30, 2017 at 4:59 PM Congratulations, Brian, for a great write ! Hugs Eve ~`* Brian Davey October 31, 2017 at 12:20 AM Thanks a million Eve

Sandra Haight October 30, 2017 at 4:49 PM Lovely imagery in your poem, Brian. Congratulations on your win! Sandra Brian Davey October 31, 2017 at 12:20 AM Thank you Sandra I am happy you enjoyed this write off mine

Anne-Lise Andresen October 30, 2017 at 3:12 PM - Congratulations on your great winning poem, Brian - hugs // S.S. :) Brian Davey October 30, 2017 at 10:59 PM Thank you so much Sunshine

Janis Medders Tobechi October 30, 2017 at 1:54 PM Back again with congratulations. Brian Davey October 30, 2017 at 10:58 PM Thank you Janis

Sandra Haight October 27, 2017 at 5:02 PM Outstanding imagery and deep feelings in your words, Brian. Seems list a winner to me! Best wishes. Sandra Brian Davey October 28, 2017 at 1:02 AM Thank you Sandra it is always a pleasure

Janis Medders Tobechi October 25, 2017 at 1:40 PM This will do very well in the contest. Just check the title with her directions and it will not be disqualified. Best wishes for the contest. Brian Davey October 25, 2017 at 4:27 PM Thank you so much Janis for the praise and the heads up on the title

Andrea Dietrich October 24, 2017 at 5:58 PM Awesome sparkling imagery, Brian. This should do well with Nette! Brian Davey October 24, 2017 at 9:25 PM Always a pleasure when I get positive comments from you my friend, they make me proud of the words I write. Thank you

Gary Smith October 24, 2017 at 3:52 PM Great imagery here Brian :) Brian Davey October 24, 2017 at 9:23 PM Thank you Gary:-)