Jack Ellison Poet Limerick

672 Million Breaths

In my lifetime, I have taken about 672 million breaths
Hoping to break the 700 barrier before my death
Running increases your pant
Running naked causes a glance
But don't let that sway you when you're trying to impress

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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart August 1, 2017 at 8:13 AM Mile wide smile you have bestowed on me this morning Jack, The Flash ;) Jack Ellison August 1, 2017 at 8:18 AM KEEP ON A-SMILIN' DEAR MO!!! It's good for your complexion, my friend! Love 'n Hugs, Jackson! XXX

Lim'Rik Flats August 1, 2017 at 8:12 AM But who is counting, I might say?//Until breaths begin to go away//Then every smoke//and every toke//taken is remembered down to the day. (?) BREATHE ON JACKSON!!! please! Jack Ellison August 1, 2017 at 8:29 AM HUH??? Could you please explain exactly what you meant or you could lie a wee bit if you must!!! HAVE A SUPER DAY JOHN JOHN!!!

Russell Sivey August 1, 2017 at 7:26 AM Just had to get that naked part in didn't you? You are an ornery guy aren't you? No matter what, I loved your limerick here my friend, a fabulous find! I definitely had a laugh with your clever gaff, I enjoyed everything about it! Great Work!! Jack Ellison August 1, 2017 at 7:30 AM YUP! Naked rules!!! That's a theme I live by! HAVE A GREAT DAT, Sir Russell!!!