Notes About The Poem
With so many ways to evaluate one’s choices, why not existential card games?
5-Card Destiny
5-Card Destiny
by Odin Roark
Worn card handling
Delivers solace
Knowing snapped dealing
With its own sound
Renders some voices honest
Others but an outcry of defiance
Longed for comfort
Courtly faces
Or
Numbered challenges
All the same
In the game of remembering
Beginners playing chance
Obliging destiny
An often painful revealing
Even as
Everyone takes a peek
Asks for more
Or
Stays pat
Destiny laughs
In the game of remembering
So often played with chance
Begetting more losers
Than winners
All rising from the table
Some call the life game
Dress their wounds
Walk out the door
While winners
Gush with this moment’s victory
Delude themselves as immortal
Strut out the door
Away from the dealings
On the cold nights
With the winds at 5 knots
Life’s inclement weather raging
Winners and losers
Drink the same bourbon
Long for the same elusive love
Game play can’t deliver
Ever notice
Some never walk away from the table
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