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5 Minutes Challenge

Those pitiless days 're enough to puzzle the mind
A phenomenal gesture then sued to have downplayed the legit
That even the impartial impact was bandit with words
Not so funny 're those days
That devils 're clad 
And ready enough 
To poison the soup 
Meant for the entourage
Pitiful quill perhaps has taken over his weak wit
And...

Unfinished

13/05/2013
For Russell Sivey's "5 Minute Challenge"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/29/2013 10:28:00 PM
Hi A.O, sorry I missed this poem till now. Belated congratulations. Are you going to finish it? It is really a great start.
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Date: 5/18/2013 9:01:00 PM
A O., Congratulation on a well deserved win, always enjoying your poems plus more... I like the way everyone showed off their poem in less than 5 minutes..... LINDA
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Date: 5/15/2013 2:01:00 PM
Interesting work for the contest..Writing one in five minutes is not so easy sometimes..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visits to my work..Sara
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Date: 5/15/2013 11:18:00 AM
A nice 5 minute poem. Congrats :-) SKAT
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Date: 5/15/2013 9:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your win A.O We had to hurry, i know what happened to you, i went nearly through it. Next time. Terry xoxo
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Date: 5/14/2013 6:13:00 AM
Nicely done. Dang, the time ran out!!
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Date: 5/13/2013 9:38:00 PM
nicely penned A.O....best wishes
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Date: 5/13/2013 2:18:00 PM
such strength in your poetry...
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