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5 Minutes Challenge

Those pitiless days 're enough to puzzle the mind A phenomenal gesture then sued to have downplayed the legit That even the impartial impact was bandit with words Not so funny 're those days That devils 're clad And ready enough To poison the soup Meant for the entourage Pitiful quill perhaps has taken over his weak wit And... Unfinished 13/05/2013 For Russell Sivey's "5 Minute Challenge"

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Date: 6/29/2013 10:28:00 PM
Hi A.O, sorry I missed this poem till now. Belated congratulations. Are you going to finish it? It is really a great start.
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Date: 5/18/2013 9:01:00 PM
A O., Congratulation on a well deserved win, always enjoying your poems plus more... I like the way everyone showed off their poem in less than 5 minutes..... LINDA
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Date: 5/15/2013 2:01:00 PM
Interesting work for the contest..Writing one in five minutes is not so easy sometimes..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visits to my work..Sara
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Date: 5/15/2013 11:18:00 AM
A nice 5 minute poem. Congrats :-) SKAT
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Date: 5/15/2013 9:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your win A.O We had to hurry, i know what happened to you, i went nearly through it. Next time. Terry xoxo
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Date: 5/14/2013 6:13:00 AM
Nicely done. Dang, the time ran out!!
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Date: 5/13/2013 9:38:00 PM
nicely penned A.O....best wishes
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Date: 5/13/2013 2:18:00 PM
such strength in your poetry...
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