5 Minutes Challenge

Those pitiless days 're enough to puzzle the mind
A phenomenal gesture then sued to have downplayed the legit
That even the impartial impact was bandit with words
Not so funny 're those days
That devils 're clad 
And ready enough 
To poison the soup 
Meant for the entourage
Pitiful quill perhaps has taken over his weak wit
And...

Unfinished

13/05/2013
For Russell Sivey's "5 Minute Challenge"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Lamoureux Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 10:28 PM
Hi A.O, sorry I missed this poem till now. Belated congratulations. Are you going to finish it? It is really a great start.
A   Avatar
May 18, 2013 at 9:01 PM
A O., Congratulation on a well deserved win, always enjoying your poems plus more... I like the way everyone showed off their poem in less than 5 minutes..... LINDA
Kendrick Avatar
May 15, 2013 at 2:01 PM
Interesting work for the contest..Writing one in five minutes is not so easy sometimes..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visits to my work..Sara
A  Avatar
May 15, 2013 at 11:18 AM
A nice 5 minute poem. Congrats :-) SKAT
Bacha Avatar
May 15, 2013 at 9:42 AM
Congratulations on your win A.O We had to hurry, i know what happened to you, i went nearly through it. Next time. Terry xoxo
Dietrich Avatar
May 14, 2013 at 6:13 AM
Nicely done. Dang, the time ran out!!
May Avatar
May 13, 2013 at 9:38 PM
nicely penned A.O....best wishes
Horsman Avatar
May 13, 2013 at 2:18 PM
such strength in your poetry...
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