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Out of my window
Lines of ghost girls passing by
The sparse mist
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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February 7, 2016 at 1:01 AM
LIKE THE HAIKU
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February 16, 2016 at 2:33 PM
Thank you, Linda.
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December 19, 2015 at 6:12 PM
Hi Viviane, wow... creepy but awesome **SKAT**
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February 16, 2016 at 2:32 PM
Yes, SKAT you have no idea how creepy it can be! But also very beautiful Thanks for reading and commenting. Much obliged!
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December 8, 2015 at 9:20 AM
Long time between these / haiku of yours, hope you start / writing more often.
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December 9, 2015 at 6:49 AM
So you're the one who reads them, Jim Tidd. Much obliged. I'll do my best to post the things I scribble and to comment on other ppls posts. I like your haiku writing, quite snappy ... =)
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