Balveen Cheema Poet Alliteration

4 Lines

Evil is scorched and scared of anything sacred and holy.

                               Nothing more sacred and holier than love
                               Lovers hearts are in the hands of god above

                                Lovers losing love in life, live lifelessly longing for love.


                                 December 16, 2015
                                 Contest: 4Lines
                                 Sponsor: Silent One

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma December 22, 2015 at 2:11 AM Brilliant take Balveen n a great win.. big congrats!

Pandita Sietesantos December 21, 2015 at 11:46 AM Excellent piece, Balveen that deserves to be on the winners' list! Love your use of clever Alliteration! Congratulations to you on your wonderful win! Pandita Balveen Cheema December 21, 2015 at 11:49 AM Thanks for being so very appreciative, Pandita!

Paul Callus December 21, 2015 at 9:36 AM Well done, Balveen...sacred love lead you to the winners' podium:) Congratulations!! ~ All the best. // paul Balveen Cheema December 21, 2015 at 11:51 AM Love-holiest of all virtues! Thanks Paul. Regards..."

Susan Gentry December 21, 2015 at 7:56 AM Congratulations on your wonderful win! Balveen Cheema December 21, 2015 at 9:29 AM Thanks Susan! Sso kind of you to congratulate!

Michael Tor December 21, 2015 at 7:09 AM Excellent win! Balveen! Balveen Cheema December 21, 2015 at 7:35 AM Thanks Michael!

Sandra Haight December 20, 2015 at 8:15 PM Congratulations on your placement in the contest, Balveen. "Nothing more sacred and holier than love." Love those words. Hugs, Sandra Balveen Cheema December 21, 2015 at 7:02 AM Thanks Sandra! Love.....

Andrea Dietrich December 20, 2015 at 7:34 PM I enjoyed this, and you got that alliteration GREAT!! Congrats to you, Balveen. Balveen Cheema December 21, 2015 at 7:03 AM Thanks Andrea for your appreciation!

Poet Destroyer A December 20, 2015 at 4:51 PM balveen, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~ Balveen Cheema December 21, 2015 at 7:35 AM Thanks Linda!

Skat A December 20, 2015 at 11:37 AM BALVEEN, Congratulations on your "4 line" win. WUV **SKAT Doodle** :) Balveen Cheema December 21, 2015 at 7:36 AM Thanks Skat!