4 Line-Contest

Our passion is forever along with each others heart.
       the deep love we share will never part.
 Your eyes reveal beauty you keep in your soul.
     without each other we'll never be whole.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 2:57 PM
Lovely poem, Patti. Congrats on your win.
Dietrich Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 6:21 PM
This is very nice, Patti. Congrats for your win.
Andresen Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 11:57 AM
- Congratulations Patti, very romantic :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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February 14, 2018 at 8:47 AM
Very romantic 4 lines Patti.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Ashley Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 5:43 PM
Patti, beautiful sentiments of love so well expressed. Best wishes for a win. ~Susan
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