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4 Autumn haiku

orange glow of 
dipping autumn sun —
infirmary bed

messages 
in the hair of front arm —
evening breeze


city noise fades 
rural silence begins 
clear autumn sky 


smoke rings 
from chimney -
autumn air

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Alison A Smith

August 29, 2026 at 4:56 AM

This is a wonderful set of autumn haiku that beautifully captures the quiet essence of the season. Your ability to distill such vivid imagery into so few words is incredibly effective. The contrast in the first piece between the natural beauty of the "dipping autumn sun" and the stark reality of the "infirmary bed" is particularly striking and poignant. I also love the sensory details woven throughout the other pieces, from the tactile evening breeze to the classic visual of smoke rings in the c

Probir Gupta

August 29, 2026 at 5:55 AM

I am delighted to hear that you have found the set of 4 haiku worth the read. Thank you so much. I write mostly haiku regularly in my Facebook page. Poetry Soup too did publish my haiku which failed to receive any response from the readers. Your assessment is encouraging for me. I will continue submitting haiku poems. Thanks once again.

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