45 Words

In a time of great collapse
No one is stopping our fall
Someone thinks someone else
Will care to save us at all
While those who you elected
Think not to mind your vote
What we do all vibrates out
Beyond seeds that are sowed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mendez Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 6:09 PM
Really liked this poem
Poetrysoup Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 2:15 PM
LOVE this poem. Thanks.
Shahein Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 10:27 AM
Great sensual writing my dear , hugs??
Kendrick Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 8:59 AM
Enjoyed reading your 45 word work..Yes, everyone creates a centrifugal ring not just politicans..What we do effects many lives..Congrats on home page showing..Sara
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May 23, 2015 at 9:39 AM
...:):):). Forever ~SKAT~
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