Jasper Abcede Poet Abecedarian

44 Drops of Blood

44 DROPS OF BLOOD
by Coui Kim MinSu JA

Silence has consumed my lonesome soul
Beneath the sheets of my darkest fall
I broke my armor, my helmet and my sword
I lost the battle after I gave my all.

These hostile MOROns speak the language of war
Treachery is their dialect, how nasty they are!
They house the villains, they feed the crooks
Yet they always call their god, every time they shoot.

I lost my sight though not am I blind,
Revenge is the light, the only light i find
My wrath and my curse are constantly roaring
Within my heart I can no longer contain.

With these 44 drops of blood I solemnly swear
Doom are these wicked, for gone are my fears
Now, I raise this peaceful banner and flip it up RED
Cause I thirst and hunger for all of their HEADS.

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Beata Agustin December 9, 2024 at 7:45 PM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Fm Rt August 20, 2016 at 6:33 AM It's in honor of the Fallen 44, isn't it??? An amazing form of symbolism

Poet Destroyer A March 21, 2016 at 9:06 PM nice to see this one again, Jasper. Linda

Skat A January 15, 2016 at 9:13 PM Jasper, I like every line of your poem above. Thank you for sharing. ** SKAT **

Poet Destroyer A March 6, 2015 at 3:12 AM JASPER, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@

Steven Hanlon March 4, 2015 at 6:04 AM serious words of rage unfathomable to one not so engaged, jasper may you find the light of sure knowledge