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4:30 Letters To Mom

Words of vain and vanity liks its a choice like you can decide when and where or why to do your job I guess its me and maybe thas okay maybe every hour is inconsiquential or juat unimportant Invisibility cloaks me makes me safe from your attack but It doesnt make me immune every sylable hangs over my head like an omen telling me im insignificant and im not sure but the more away i am the eaier it is for you to hurt me you just don't want to try you just want to look away keep looking

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/7/2024 6:54:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/7/2016 10:46:00 PM
Kaleigh Barteski, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 8/30/2010 8:26:00 AM
Wow I missed reading a lot of excellent poetry this past weekend. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration Kaleigh. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/29/2010 3:15:00 PM
So enjoyed your most creative write tonight.. there are many contests featured on Soup.. check them out and enter.. and good luck..with luv..
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