Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday Poet Shape

3dom Questionku

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Dial 3DOM#####¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤             Dial 3DOM
4, 5, 6 and ask:¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤            Dad and Mom, and ask:
Should I finish my task?¤¤¤¤¤¤¤            Did you finish your task?
Dial 3DOM####¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤              Dial 3DOM
4, 5, 6 and call:¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤              Dad or Mom and call:
Is it so essential?¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤              Why can Tom break the wall?
Dial 3DOM####@@@@¤¤¤¤¤¤              Dial 3DOM              
4, 5, 6 and... Say,####¤¤¤¤¤¤              Dad and Mom and... Say,
D'you think it's worth the day?¤             Is it so hard to stay?
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Andrea Dietrich May 5, 2013 at 8:52 AM very imaginative!!! I enjoyed this.

Bukang Liwayway April 22, 2013 at 9:32 AM very nice poem my friend Hanitra..so creative :) thanks for dropping by..have a nice day

Richard Lamoureux April 16, 2013 at 6:52 AM Good morning Hanitra. Just wanted to drop by and say hello. I hope this greeting finds you well.

Richard Lamoureux April 6, 2013 at 7:33 AM Hi Hanitra I was so moved by your visits yesterday. Your words are so kind and encouraging. I hope you are well. Hugs Rick.

Richard Lamoureux March 27, 2013 at 7:48 PM Hi Hanitra, Charles Atlas was a famous body builder in the 70s and his advertising was directed at adolescents who wanted to be muscular. His story was how the 90lb weakling could send away for his secret and in8 short weeks become a muscle man who would get all the girls. Thanks for visiting and commenting. It is always nice having a visit from you. Hugs Rick

Harry Horsman March 24, 2013 at 10:10 AM amazing just amazing is this...

Robert Johnson March 21, 2013 at 4:08 PM I never got Pink Floyd like my good friend did either. :)

Richard Lamoureux March 20, 2013 at 4:27 PM Hi Hanitra, thanks so much for your visits today. you always make me smile. You may have to explain the above to me. it is very intresting to look at and it looks like you put a lot of thought into it. Richard Lamoureux March 22, 2013 at 7:59 AM Thanks for the insight, you are so creative. Have a wonderful day. Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday March 21, 2013 at 10:33 AM ... And I put a little bit of what kids may think of schools and teachers and...Naughty Tom who never gets caught...And of course, it's about Dads and Moms' conception of freedom... Perhaps too many spices in the baking batch?! My question to the Question Man... Thanks for your visit! Love, Hanitra Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday March 21, 2013 at 10:21 AM Uhh! Pretty tough to really explain, Rick! I'd better have the reaction of my readers about what they see, can see or want/choose to see. I tried to bake new cakes - especially for my new students, starting from your Questionku "regulations" and relating to the freedom of free verse; I added some Pink Floyd flavour: the "we don't need no education"-song from their album "The Wall"....

Donna Jones March 10, 2013 at 7:17 PM You are so awesome at this...and I've seen a few holes in the wall too...great poem as well.