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3 Spring Haiku

Pill bugs wet with dew
as crawling gray domes mirror
green turf, salmon sun.

Copter seeds whirling,
a squirrel chases paper
treasure for her nest.

Young cat mock-tweeting,
wily sparrows unheeding,
paws press on the screen.

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Pandita Sietesantos Date: 5/27/2014 7:04:00 AM I love these haiku poems - great imagery - well done! Login to Reply B.B.Woodall Tulsa Ok Date: 5/27/2014 2:55:00 PM Thank you very much. I'm glad you liked them. Have a good day. --B.B.W.

Skat A Date: 5/26/2014 8:33:00 PM Hi B B Woodall, much enjoyed these haiku. I love and enjoyed the imagery of the hungry cat. Enjoying the view...... SKAT Login to Reply B.B.Woodall Tulsa Ok Date: 5/27/2014 3:00:00 PM Thanks again for the compliment, SKAT. We never seem to have fewer than four cats around the house, so they get into my poems from time to time. --B.B.W.

Deb Wilson Date: 5/26/2014 5:01:00 PM good haiku! Login to Reply B.B.Woodall Tulsa Ok Date: 5/26/2014 5:48:00 PM Thank you, Deb. I don't write many haiku. I'm glad you liked it. --b.b.w.

David Williams Date: 5/26/2014 1:48:00 PM B.B. good images but if I may say there should not be any capitals in haiku's....I like them though...David Login to Reply B.B.Woodall Tulsa Ok Date: 5/26/2014 5:52:00 PM Thanks for your comment, David. I see your point about the capitals. I write far more sonnets than haiku, and its hard for me to relax with freer forms.