Victoria Addino Poet Rhyme

3 Little Sparrows

2 little sparrows playing on a gate 
One chasing the other over a worm the other ate
Along came another who was watching from a tree
No longer just the two with the other now there’s three
On the ground was an apple, lying in the grass
The other flew between the two, he made the others crash
So big was the apple not for one more for ten 
2 friends now met another they’ll meet tomorrow 
once again

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Victoria Addino December 9, 2023 at 4:56 PM Thanks so much! I love writing about Birds

Jude Herrick December 9, 2023 at 4:50 PM I can picture it, fondly. That's how they do. I remember recently, seeing a crow hop in the back of a parked truck, popping his head up every so often to make sure everything was still cool. He must have found something good back there.

Hannington Mumo October 16, 2020 at 5:28 PM A great, well-rhymed mini-ballad of sorts...powerfully indited by a seemingly fine writer of poetic lines. ~ Kudos!

Joseph P. DiMino September 27, 2019 at 9:39 AM If only there were no cats. Though I must admit to having two. Great little poem. Outstanding write!

Mahtab Bangalee September 5, 2019 at 10:25 PM simply beautiful // like it really

DM Babbit July 23, 2019 at 12:42 PM So cute.