3 In 1

3 in 1 Poem
Hi there,
I have attempted to have a bit of a play with todays write  
This poem is written to be read right the way thru the first time,  then only   the first line of each of the verses and then read again with  every second line in all the verses to conclude.
I hope you enjoy

Hot sweats and cold shivers, 
Tall  buildings and long rivers 

Feeling lost and all alone
Busy streets , not like home

Crying out but Noone hears,
Celebrations and lots of cheers

Christmas time is almost here,
It's not the same without you near
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Peranteau Avatar
May 13, 2020 at 9:43 AM
it's always rewarding when the perspicacious by happenstance discover the witty artist....*vinks, james
Swartz Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 1:22 AM
Such amazing creativity here. I enjoyed all three poems you gave us.
Stevenson Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 4:59 AM
Hi James, Thankyou! I don’t think we have yet met. I must jump on and have a read of your work. H xx
Mishra Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 12:41 AM
nice one with well applied trick!
Stevenson Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 4:59 AM
Thanks Ashok!
Allison Avatar
March 20, 2018 at 5:54 PM
how awesome Mockingbird I love the fact we get three poems in of one and they work so well in their own right:-) write on!:-) hugs jan xx
Stevenson Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 4:57 AM
Thanks Jan, this was one of my first ever writes. Looking forward to learning more about poetry as I enjoy it. Will be sure to jump on your page and enjoy a read , h
Stover Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 7:10 PM
Sweet and lovely all three ways.
Stevenson Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 4:54 AM
Thankyou Christy, H
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