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3 In 1

3 in 1 Poem Hi there, I have attempted to have a bit of a play with todays write This poem is written to be read right the way thru the first time, then only the first line of each of the verses and then read again with every second line in all the verses to conclude. I hope you enjoy Hot sweats and cold shivers, Tall buildings and long rivers Feeling lost and all alone Busy streets , not like home Crying out but Noone hears, Celebrations and lots of cheers Christmas time is almost here, It's not the same without you near

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James Peranteau

Date: 5/13/2020 9:43:00 AM

it's always rewarding when the perspicacious by happenstance discover the witty artist....*vinks, james

James Swartz

Date: 3/26/2018 1:22:00 AM

Such amazing creativity here. I enjoyed all three poems you gave us.

Mockingbird Stevenson
Date: 3/26/2018 4:59:00 AM

Hi James, Thankyou! I don’t think we have yet met. I must jump on and have a read of your work. H xx

Ashok Kumar Mishra

Date: 3/22/2018 12:41:00 AM

nice one with well applied trick!

Mockingbird Stevenson
Date: 3/26/2018 4:59:00 AM

Thanks Ashok!

Jan Allison

Date: 3/20/2018 5:54:00 PM

how awesome Mockingbird I love the fact we get three poems in of one and they work so well in their own right:-) write on!:-) hugs jan xx

Mockingbird Stevenson
Date: 3/26/2018 4:57:00 AM

Thanks Jan, this was one of my first ever writes. Looking forward to learning more about poetry as I enjoy it. Will be sure to jump on your page and enjoy a read , h

Niall Fulham

Date: 3/19/2018 5:34:00 PM

Hi Mockingbird , nice to meet , very clever and all three flow beautifully well done ::))) hugs from Ireland going one way ;) Niall

Mockingbird Stevenson
Date: 3/26/2018 4:55:00 AM

Hi Nial, Nice to meet you also. Look forward to having a read of your Irish limericks (or whatever other poetry you write) Big smiles, from the Scottish Aussie living downunder x

Christy Stover

Date: 11/15/2016 7:10:00 PM

Sweet and lovely all three ways.

Mockingbird Stevenson
Date: 3/26/2018 4:54:00 AM

Thankyou Christy, H