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3 Haikus

bony tree branches thrust at the blanket of stars sky yields to darkness. last autumn leaves drift rafting the river current cavorting with wind. storm sweeps fiercely down cavalry charge of thunder gusting rain hurls grits.

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Skat A

Date: 9/8/2015 1:38:00 AM

Awesome

Josefina Costales
Date: 9/8/2015 8:23:00 AM

Thanks Skat for stopping by

Eric Boddie

Date: 8/30/2015 10:22:00 AM

your talent for haikus is impressive....your use of imagery is quite effective....it was a pleasure to read your words....and the way they flow is simply superb....;)

Josefina Costales
Date: 8/30/2015 10:34:00 AM

Thanks Eric...actually I still struggle to compose haikus - the form is so restrictive, and yet challenging.

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 8/30/2015 1:34:00 AM

3 great haikus, 1st one my fav :-)

Josefina Costales
Date: 8/30/2015 9:25:00 AM

thanks for dropping by. appreciate your comments