Josefina Costales Poet Haiku

3 Haikus

bony tree branches
thrust at the blanket of stars
sky yields to darkness.

last autumn leaves drift
rafting the river current
cavorting with wind.

storm sweeps fiercely down
cavalry charge of thunder
gusting rain hurls grits.

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Skat A September 8, 2015 at 1:38 AM Awesome Josefina Costales September 8, 2015 at 8:23 AM Thanks Skat for stopping by

Eric Boddie August 30, 2015 at 10:22 AM your talent for haikus is impressive....your use of imagery is quite effective....it was a pleasure to read your words....and the way they flow is simply superb....;) Josefina Costales August 30, 2015 at 10:34 AM Thanks Eric...actually I still struggle to compose haikus - the form is so restrictive, and yet challenging.

Njeri Hunjeri August 30, 2015 at 1:34 AM 3 great haikus, 1st one my fav :-) Josefina Costales August 30, 2015 at 9:25 AM thanks for dropping by. appreciate your comments