3 Am

Three in morning wide awake How much more of this pain can I take I prayed this pain would never come But here it is, I wish I could go numb I look at the sky and wonder why Now I just ask to die when I look at the sky Why did you turn out to be that kind of guy I believed you loved me Why didn't I see before it was too late for me Now sweet death set me free For it is too late for me can't you see Look at the clock now it's quarter pass three......

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Pamela Graham

Date: 9/17/2016 11:37:00 AM

I pray you are finding some peace and healing through your writing. Keep it up, lovely lady.

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 9/8/2016 5:54:00 AM

Hi Tracey. I really enjoyed your piece!! Congrats for having your poem featured in the Poetry Soup homepage!!! ;-)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/7/2016 1:47:00 PM

TRACEY, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 8/31/2016 1:02:00 AM

Tracey Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT

Tracey Pollack
Date: 9/7/2016 3:30:00 PM

Thank you for the warm welcome. I look forward to reading all the wonderful work on this site. Hope you have a great day.

Lu Loo

Date: 8/29/2016 10:28:00 AM

Tracey, beautifully sad lady...I was actually up at 3 am last night when I read this lol...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo

Tracey Pollack
Date: 9/7/2016 3:33:00 PM

Thank you. I sorry to hear you was also up at 3 am lol hopefully it was for a completely different reason. :( Thank you for the chance to share my work thru your contest. Hope you have a wonderful day