38 Years 2004

38 years  2004

Obscured by mist, as time went on
when our life was blurred 
we would make a list of negative thoughts
that were vocalized 
by anger, resentment and pain
but we always managed to see a light
through the fog no matter how faint
it would flicker from time to time
then it would become bright
and in our life all was right with the world
I’m happy to be here with you living somewhere different 
and doing something new

Ralph Sergi
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Allison Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 5:01 PM
So wonderful that after 38 years you can still talk openly about little niggles and sort things out and all is right in your life:-) hugs Jan xx
Sergi Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 4:03 PM
Thank you, Jan It must have happened I wrote it at that time but every thing is fine. you can say that writing these anniversary poems is part of my bucket list.
Krampe Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 4:52 PM
I discovered the 39 years one and am working my way backwards. I like your insights and how you put them into poems.
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