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365 Days

365 Days

Days flow like water
A trickle, then a stream
Suddenly the year is ending

Days, nights turn like a carousel
Ups, downs, stops, starts
Suddenly the year is ending

Celebration of the good
Reflection on the bad
The year is ending

Fireworks, laughter, 
resolutions, promises

Promises to savour the next 365 days
Resolution to slow the carousel

Days flow like water
A trickle, then a stream
Suddenly the year is ending

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Date: 10/28/2023 4:02:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 10/27/2023 2:40:00 AM
A brilliant poem and description. Well done.
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Date: 10/26/2023 8:21:00 PM
A nice flow in your poem. Welcome to poetrysoup
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