35 Seconds To Suicide

1…2…3…4…
This is battle…This is war.

5…6…7...8…
Escape is just beyond this gate.

9...10...11...
All good girls go to heaven.

12...13...14...15...
The blade is ready, the blade is keen.

16...17.,.18...19...
Everybody must demean.

20...21...22...
I’d be alive if they only knew 

23...24...25...26...
My problems are too hard to fix. 

27…28…29…30…
Life is everything but sturdy.

31…32...33…
Life is the lock, death is the key. 

34...3-...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Britt Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 9:59 AM
YEEEEEEA this is it THIS... is great. Harsh subject but you've desensitized it just as they probably have done themselves, clever <3
Dah Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 8:29 PM
Thank you again :)
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