33 and Beautiful

I was strolling through the rich coast on a Sunday evening,
No doubt, I had glanced at beautiful Enid,
I have to accede; your face, all, of you, is incredible, pristine and attractive.
Through the swarm, I was transfixed,
Transfixed to look out for you, Lady E'!
If you ever happened to get lost in the jungle, I would fight a good fight,
Till I extricate you from the jungle my Lady!
Incredible, you're beautiful.
That nightfall you were my heroine,
And you will always be one,
Since you stained my eyes like the spectrum colors on a rainbow.
Incredible you're 33 and beautiful,
You're my Jasmine, my modern timetable,
Enid my Lady, my cheery pick,
Welcome to my castle, in it, I'm the Prince; you're a Princess,
You're a Princess in my fortress taken care of, No one can harm you my Lady,
Precious, Hilarious and tremendous you're my Lady
You're destined eternally to look beautiful.
Coz your sky, will always be beautiful.
Good Lady might, save the day,
And make me your summer rain.
Sting me, back.

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Macfarlane Avatar
May 19, 2015 at 12:48 PM
Hi Bryan, I enjoyed this sweet and romantic write very much....may you always see her through rainbow eyes : )
Oule Avatar
August 22, 2015 at 4:54 AM
Ceceilia thank you for reading this one my dear one, i do appreciate
Callus Avatar
March 25, 2015 at 1:09 PM
You are a nice and romantic person, Bryan; this poem is proof of that! Lady E is a lucky lady! Well done! // paul
Oule Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 5:16 AM
Thank you for the compliment, Folks say im a nice person, i add to this to my happiness, Thank you for viewing this too. Bryan
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March 14, 2015 at 12:05 PM
Hi Bryan, I love the protective feelings you have for Enid and she sounds like a very beautiful lady. I hope you rain as prince and princess forever in your castle. You have some beautiful imagery in this poem and it was a delight to read it. Hope you post some new work soon. Thanks for reading mine. Best wishes, carolyn
Oule Avatar
March 17, 2015 at 9:19 AM
Carol thank you for passing by #Lv Your view has been valuable and always will be. Thank you, yes i'm crafting one or two poems soon i will publish them, Hope you will pass around again to read them, But fact is i have many unpublished poems of which i do use them to always enter several contests. Bryan Loves
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January 3, 2015 at 7:12 PM
'sweet love poem and I see it won a contest? BIG congrats!
Oule Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 12:23 PM
ANDREA THANKS YOU DEAR. and hAPPY NEW YEAR bRYAN loves
Kayode Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 4:03 AM
Nice one, congrats Bryan ...huggs
Oule Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 3:58 AM
Kayode thanks for passing by to read my poem Bryan
Allison Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 7:42 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Bryan:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Oule Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 4:05 AM
Allison Lve, thank you again for dropping by so the loving Lady E wins again Bryan loves you too bard, Ali
Oule Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 4:00 AM
Allison Love thank again for dropping yead the loving
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January 1, 2015 at 6:57 PM
BRYAN, thank you for supporting one of the many, contest I ran last year. Dropping by to say hi in hopes you are enjoying the first day of 2015 :) :) Stop by my latest blog "You Call This Poetry" if you'd like. Enjoy the win, I sure did. Love Linda
Oule Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 4:03 AM
Hope you too enjoyed your first day of 2015 Lv, and thank you too for valuing my poem i win Lady E's wins too Bryan loves you too
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November 11, 2014 at 9:52 AM
Lovely romantic write. Oh to be 33 again! :-) Well done! Pandita
Oule Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 4:04 AM
Pandita yeah she is still beautiful, Besides thanks too for reading my poem PrettyBird XOXOXOX from Bryan
Allison Avatar
July 20, 2014 at 2:32 PM
Enid sure is a lucky lady to have such a wonderful tribute written for her. Loved this write. Hugs Jan xxx
Oule Avatar
July 20, 2014 at 4:10 PM
Thank you for reading my new Poem, Alli''' xoxoxxoxoxooxoxoxoxoox
Oule Avatar
July 20, 2014 at 4:08 PM
She is Jan thank you fro passing by again Love De Poet xoxox Bryan
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