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30th January 2016

fearless daffodils
awake to a brand new day
thrush hastens with nest

© Harry J Horsman 2016

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Daver Austin

April 16, 2016 at 2:06 PM

I read the comments and finally got the message. Terrific, Harry. Love, daver

Elaine George

February 20, 2016 at 5:38 AM

Ahhhh! This is Haiku has such impact and also conveys such a powerful message. A masterpiece, Harry. To my favs. Elaine

Cherl Dunn

February 19, 2016 at 4:13 AM

Dear Harry Horseman This is an excellent poem, a pleasure too read, love your imagery, last line the best, thrush hastens with nest, awesomely done, cheri

Connie Marcum Wong

February 13, 2016 at 4:12 PM

This is brilliant Harry! You let the daffodils and the thrush exclaim that spring will soon be arriving. Beautiful haiku! #7

Scott Thirtyseven

February 11, 2016 at 12:09 PM

Wonderful image, and I like the urgency of the thrush. Great words.

Michael Whatley

February 9, 2016 at 11:32 AM

Paints a wonderful picture, great use of haiku, Harry!

Sara Kendrick

February 8, 2016 at 5:45 PM

Ahh!! I enjoyed reading this one..We don't have a Thrush here in this area that I know of but I have seen the Blue Birds tending to their nest..I don't think that they have put eggs in there yet for the babies would freeze but they are getting ready..Thanks for the visit to my page..I hope that with the inspiration that you write many new ones..Sara