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30th January 2016

fearless daffodils awake to a brand new day thrush hastens with nest © Harry J Horsman 2016

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Date: 4/16/2016 2:06:00 PM
I read the comments and finally got the message. Terrific, Harry. Love, daver
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Date: 2/20/2016 5:38:00 AM
Ahhhh! This is Haiku has such impact and also conveys such a powerful message. A masterpiece, Harry. To my favs. Elaine
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Date: 2/19/2016 4:13:00 AM
Dear Harry Horseman This is an excellent poem, a pleasure too read, love your imagery, last line the best, thrush hastens with nest, awesomely done, cheri
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Date: 2/13/2016 4:12:00 PM
This is brilliant Harry! You let the daffodils and the thrush exclaim that spring will soon be arriving. Beautiful haiku! #7
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Date: 2/11/2016 12:09:00 PM
Wonderful image, and I like the urgency of the thrush. Great words.
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Date: 2/9/2016 11:32:00 AM
Paints a wonderful picture, great use of haiku, Harry!
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Date: 2/8/2016 5:45:00 PM
Ahh!! I enjoyed reading this one..We don't have a Thrush here in this area that I know of but I have seen the Blue Birds tending to their nest..I don't think that they have put eggs in there yet for the babies would freeze but they are getting ready..Thanks for the visit to my page..I hope that with the inspiration that you write many new ones..Sara
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Date: 2/8/2016 1:35:00 PM
I really like the message Harry, and I see we have both included a thrush in our haiku..'
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Date: 2/5/2016 6:46:00 PM
oh I love how you put the thrush in there at the end. Delightful, my friend.
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Date: 2/4/2016 10:06:00 PM
such a beautiful image...ours were confused and started to rise in december but now are blanketed beneath snow ...
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Date: 2/3/2016 11:56:00 AM
pleased by this mesmerizing 'ku, harry..huggs
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Date: 2/1/2016 3:22:00 PM
Excellent poem my lovely friend,bl
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Date: 2/1/2016 3:07:00 PM
this is the beauty of your pen Harry. stunning day to share. SKAT
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Date: 2/1/2016 3:24:00 AM
:) I've never seen a daffodils in real but i've seen lots in picture, it would be nice to see a real one.. =`) beautiful pic Harry!~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Date: 1/31/2016 3:41:00 PM
A delightful haiku .... We had our first daffodil in flower in the garden today Harry... spring is on its way! :-) hugs Jan xx7
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Date: 1/31/2016 3:47:00 PM
It's unbelievable Jan, last year it was late feb, and i thought that was incredible, but this year beats them all....