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30th January 2016

fearless daffodils
awake to a brand new day
thrush hastens with nest

© Harry J Horsman 2016

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Daver Austin

Date: 4/16/2016 2:06:00 PM

I read the comments and finally got the message. Terrific, Harry. Love, daver

Elaine George

Date: 2/20/2016 5:38:00 AM

Ahhhh! This is Haiku has such impact and also conveys such a powerful message. A masterpiece, Harry. To my favs. Elaine

Cherl Dunn

Date: 2/19/2016 4:13:00 AM

Dear Harry Horseman This is an excellent poem, a pleasure too read, love your imagery, last line the best, thrush hastens with nest, awesomely done, cheri

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/13/2016 4:12:00 PM

This is brilliant Harry! You let the daffodils and the thrush exclaim that spring will soon be arriving. Beautiful haiku! #7

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 2/11/2016 12:09:00 PM

Wonderful image, and I like the urgency of the thrush. Great words.

Michael Whatley

Date: 2/9/2016 11:32:00 AM

Paints a wonderful picture, great use of haiku, Harry!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/8/2016 5:45:00 PM

Ahh!! I enjoyed reading this one..We don't have a Thrush here in this area that I know of but I have seen the Blue Birds tending to their nest..I don't think that they have put eggs in there yet for the babies would freeze but they are getting ready..Thanks for the visit to my page..I hope that with the inspiration that you write many new ones..Sara

Joe Maverick

Date: 2/8/2016 1:35:00 PM

I really like the message Harry, and I see we have both included a thrush in our haiku..'

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/5/2016 6:46:00 PM

oh I love how you put the thrush in there at the end. Delightful, my friend.

Sandra Adams

Date: 2/4/2016 10:06:00 PM

such a beautiful image...ours were confused and started to rise in december but now are blanketed beneath snow ...

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/3/2016 11:56:00 AM

pleased by this mesmerizing 'ku, harry..huggs

Bl Devnath

Date: 2/1/2016 3:22:00 PM

Excellent poem my lovely friend,bl

Skat A

Date: 2/1/2016 3:07:00 PM

this is the beauty of your pen Harry. stunning day to share. SKAT

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 2/1/2016 3:24:00 AM

:) I've never seen a daffodils in real but i've seen lots in picture, it would be nice to see a real one.. =`) beautiful pic Harry!~Olive Eloisa =`)