30 Days After

30 DAYS AFTER


Congratulations! For you're 30 day straight run

Watch what happens now my friend

Your life will be so much fun

The habit you formed some time ago

Thinking positive every day

You're going to realise now my friend

Negative thoughts have gone away

You worked so hard, it took great strength

You did not stop at any length

When negative thoughts came to say hi

You did kick them out with an outstanding goodbye

Now you will see that they hardly return

And when they do, you will be unconcerned

You have now built your mind to be courageously strong

You have mastered you're mind, you can not go wrong

See how easy life will be, your mind is toned and you are free

To reach your goals, your destiny

This 30 day test, my friend is no fake

For you now have a habit, THAT'S TOO HARD TO BRAKE!!!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 12/18/2009 3:59:00 AM
You are not just a poet, but also possess the gift of a motivational speaker. You should try.
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Date: 11/20/2009 4:12:00 PM
My mind is still a purring Harley Davidson, sitting halfway between departure and destination, ready to neither be master, or mastered. thank you for offering the challenge.
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Date: 11/11/2009 2:52:00 PM
Wow it played in my head like a song thats pretty cool and thanx for reading Heaven on Earth Im glad you liked
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Date: 11/4/2009 8:43:00 AM
Ending on a positive note! Excellent! Sincerely Moses
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Date: 10/30/2009 4:10:00 PM
nice! I like the way you write... very much :)
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Date: 10/27/2009 1:07:00 PM
It would be nice to take these tests, then move on >> James
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