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30 Below

joy of frozen fun
spray fine mister in the sun
star spangled ice show!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 10/24/2009 6:55:00 AM
I don't know if I could stand to go outside in that. If I put on enough to keep warm, I probably would not be able to move. Soup mail. Keeping writing. Sara
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Date: 6/14/2009 12:46:00 PM
Yeah, haikus rule; compressing a universal frame into 3 lines, withough missing a thing; shivers in my spine, needles and cylinders emerge from it due to the cold lines jojojo thanks for the experience!!=D
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Date: 6/13/2009 4:02:00 PM
I like it, why do you call it 30 below?
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Date: 6/8/2009 2:07:00 PM
Wow, a patriotic ice show awesome>James
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Date: 5/19/2009 4:01:00 PM
I got the image in my mind =]
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Date: 5/6/2009 11:37:00 PM
Lovely image Jim.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 4/30/2009 3:58:00 PM
I love the way you take a term that would typically be used for summer and insert it into your winter creation. Fantastic! Best of luck in the contest, James. Blessings, Donna
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Date: 4/29/2009 11:29:00 AM
hey james nice poem.i love it.thanks for you help james.:-)
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Date: 4/26/2009 11:27:00 PM
Bes wishes with this one Jim & thanks for your welcome blog comments today.Rgds Brian Family history research ...another bonus from the internet I've found
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Date: 4/26/2009 12:35:00 PM
Nice Haiku. A Deceptive form - it looks easier than it is to write them and you have done a good job here. Could use a little "frozen fun" today - it is a hot day in NYC. Peace Matthew Anish
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Date: 4/24/2009 6:05:00 PM
What a wonderful image!! I am defiantley going to have to try this next winter...if it gets that cold next year of course! You are an awesome poet Jim! ~Trudy~
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Date: 4/24/2009 3:06:00 PM
Wow, love the image of a "star spangled ice show." Frozen fun is an awesome treat to young and old alike. Great work, James!
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Date: 4/22/2009 8:36:00 PM
The joyous cold days of winter can be so beautiufl Well penned
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Date: 4/22/2009 7:01:00 AM
Best of luck with this, Jim, a fine aurora borealis of a write.
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Date: 4/20/2009 12:56:00 PM
didn't have much time here today,went to see grandma after work,but i had to see this one-wonderful,even better-star spangled ice show-wonderful haiku,you re so talented and thanks you re even a friend-charma;-)
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Date: 4/19/2009 5:50:00 PM
brrrrrrrrrrr Light & Love
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Date: 4/19/2009 1:14:00 PM
Nice work James and best of luck if you decide to post...Raul
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Date: 4/19/2009 11:01:00 AM
and good luck from my heart my friend,and just to let you know my friends marilyn and leonard who you prayed for when loosing their son are seeing a bit of light in their life coping much better now,thanks again-charma
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Date: 4/19/2009 10:59:00 AM
what an amazing haiku-the frozen fun makes me think of a holiday in the snow,making snowmen,spray fine mister in the sun makes me think of a holiday in the bahamas or hawaii,and for you im sure its Minnesota with your girls-ice crystals flash stars!wonderful,you ve sent me in a good mood with your haiku and its going to my favs -charma
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Date: 4/19/2009 10:45:00 AM
Frozen fun, frozen treat!Very nice and best of luck! Hugs, Robin~~
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Date: 4/19/2009 10:19:00 AM
This sparkles, James.......I love the joy in this shines and makes me smile!! Great entry for Abe's contest!! Good luck! love, Carrie (Thank you for your very kind comments on my poems. I really am touched by such nice words. :)
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Date: 4/19/2009 9:52:00 AM
Wonderful haiku created awesome wishes.
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Date: 4/19/2009 7:58:00 AM
Wow! Gorgeous imagery! Winter can be undeniably beautiful and you make it so here! Good luck! Love, Shar
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Date: 4/19/2009 7:56:00 AM
As usual, a three lined masterpiece. Well, their not all three lined, but they are good!. Good luck in the contest. Love, Dane Ann
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