3:00pm Departure

Formations fly, two vees silhouetted 
against a leaden sky, winging their way
to warmer climes, according to flight plan
scheduled by nature, primal instinct, geese
programmed, heed the call when leaves turn then fall.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
October 16, 2010 at 10:33 AM
Excellent poetry to be reading this Saturday Carol. Hope you are enjoying your weekend. Love, Carol
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October 15, 2010 at 4:14 PM
Just like clockwork with those birds, carol. I enjoyed the imagery here. Now THAT is good title choosing, like you did it here!! Luv, Andrea
Mehta Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 2:49 PM
Very creative and gripping write, carol
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October 15, 2010 at 11:07 AM
A remarkablle qautrain, a real delight, carol nette
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