2nd Period Ode

Second Period Ode
Michael, Jaydin, Jin, Ashley, Andre, Ametriyus, J’Maine, Amari, Beijae, Morgan, Dr. Corbin and Mrs. Tobey

O, backpack with your books and pencils and things,
You weigh a ton, but you are my wings.
You carry my stuff wherever I go
But sometimes I wish 
That you could stay home.
You are the hump on my back,
Like a camel in the desert.
In reality you are my treasure.
You carry my dreams to the ocean of knowledge.
You’re my path to success,
My key to college.
You used to be shiny and new
but
now you are heavy and dirty too.
With duct tape and staples to keep you together
You are full of promises and hope
And I’ll keep you forever.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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May 6, 2016 at 9:39 AM
SUE, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. ~SKAT~
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April 24, 2016 at 9:06 AM
Sue Corbin, nicely penned. Glad to read your poem today. Luv *LINDA*
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May 16, 2014 at 10:54 AM
Thank you for sharing :)
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