2nd Freestyle updated

(This is the start of another battle. Last night I was chatting with another person that I met on a different poetry site. He said that he liked to freestyle and he wanted to battle me. So I left him the following bars to respond to. I didn't have much to go on since his profile was set to private. Please let me know what you think of it. Also if anyone wants to battle I'm game. Just shoot me a message. Without further ado here's my "First round".) Adam Smith well here's my first issue, I don't really know enough about you to diss you. I can't see your profile, no idea of your rap style. No idea if you're grown or if you're just a child. No matter though cause I get buck wild, as you'll soon witness. Tear your face off like the logo for the Misfits. Leaving mass carnage up in this b**ch, and I just flipped my mind switch, from a gentleman to the GOAT. Step up or step off cause my words got you by the scrot.... (UPDATE! Adam Smith never responded. So I decided to battle myself) Now listen here old man, your verse went to the trash can. This is a young man's game, your style is ass Fam. It's my prize to take, your whole style's fake. You're battling yourself and losing for f**k's sake! Every day I wake and bake. Is it nerves or do you always shake? This was a bad idea, you should take a break!