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25th Wedding Anniversary

Marriage is not a boat rowing gently down the stream It is a family car that for years and years surprisingly passed the MOT The mechanic looks worried asks carefully about the possible possibility of a new model But you shake no see you next year we still like our ride we do not care about an extra rattle now and then Fill her up with super plus because we still have a long way to go

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/28/2016 7:58:00 AM
Niels,, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/7/2016 8:27:00 AM
well expressed
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Date: 10/9/2011 4:04:00 PM
Love the analogy, Neils : ) Marriage is still an awesome institution....It's we who need to reinvent ourselves. Enjoyed this very much and if you are celebrating, congratulations! Love, Annalise
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