25th December 2020

If it were to happen today
When the star above so bright
How to ape those of yesterday
When scanned in an era of byte.

 © Harry J Horsman 2020
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January 6, 2021 at 9:53 AM
Nicely done and well expressed Harry. Congrats. God Bless, JB
Crabtree Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 8:51 AM
A well written Chastushka, harry. I enjoyed it :)
Lamoureux Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 6:47 AM
Not surprised this is a winner Harry. Happy New Year my friend.
Allison Avatar
December 27, 2020 at 3:53 PM
well penned harry, many congrats on your win and hope 2021 is a good one for you and your family:-) hugs Jan xx
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December 27, 2020 at 10:22 AM
Congratulations on your win, Harry. Happy New Year. Hugs Eve
Tor Avatar
December 26, 2020 at 8:46 PM
Merry Christmas Harry and Congratulations my friend on Andrea's contest win...
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December 26, 2020 at 11:03 AM
Congratulations on your win. Really enjoyed it. I wonder what He would say if He was born today and had to life our life. Enjoy your win with blessings........................
Watt Avatar
December 25, 2020 at 5:13 PM
Well done and thought-provoking, Harry. Congrats in Andrea's contest ~ John
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December 25, 2020 at 2:13 AM
Great form you did well, it seems so odd these days that people believe in the Christmas star when the whole world knows Jesus was born in Oct.xx
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December 25, 2020 at 1:45 AM
A form I never used but you did well. ~~
Dietrich Avatar
December 24, 2020 at 5:41 PM
This was an interesting look at modernized nativity scene, well that is how I took it! Congrats in my contest, Harry. Merry Christmas too.
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December 24, 2020 at 1:39 PM
How easy it is in today's world and era of byte to fool the believing into believing even stronger that the bright star is the Star of Bethlehem. Great Chastushka Harry. Happy Christmas to you and your family. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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December 24, 2020 at 6:39 AM
The use of a few good men perhaps better than the media haze. Love your chatushka! Merry Christmas, dear Harry!
Kendrick Avatar
December 24, 2020 at 4:06 AM
Interesting work. I think I understand the first two lines and the last ..LOL..I hope this is a great Christmas for you and your family and the Best Year ahead ever. Sara Thanks for dropping by..
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December 24, 2020 at 2:57 AM
Good one Harry, hope you are well. I hope you have a lovely Christmas and a happy new year. Tom
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