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24 Hours My observations are my own, They are a product of my realm. I see good people reveal humanity I feel the desperation of an innocent man I acknowledge the appreciation of my gift I determine narration to be lies I witness the love between mother and son I loathe drunk drivers I impose pride for vinyl collection I depict pain in my son who lost his Brother Kids Daddy I let the lyrics of my spinning disc alter my mood I experience the gift of empathy to share with a friend. I receive gratitude for guidance I give to the addicted I witness the numbing of pain I accept rewards for my passions The properties of today will navigate my path in life

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Date: 4/12/2019 4:01:00 PM
Congrats on being in the top 100 new poems!
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karen powell
Date: 4/13/2019 12:13:00 PM
Thank you. That was the second poem I ever wrote in my life but I am really getting into this. Thanks again.
Date: 4/8/2019 6:01:00 PM
A thoughtful and heartfelt first piece. Welcome to the Soup, you will fit in nicely. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 4/7/2019 1:39:00 PM
I enjoy this poem. My favorite part was “my observations are my own. They are a product of my realm”. I love that.
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Date: 4/7/2019 8:09:00 AM
A beautiful acknowledgement in the course of the day. Great Write,Karen!
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Date: 3/31/2019 10:15:00 PM
Peace and God's Blessings to you and yours...A very well thought out and written piece of Art...Respect
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karen powell
Date: 4/2/2019 11:28:00 AM
Thank you so much. That means a lot to me.
Date: 3/31/2019 2:40:00 PM
A very fulfilling 24 hrs. Congrats on your Feature of the day.
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