24 Hours

24 Hours


My observations are my own,
   They are a product of my realm.
I see good people reveal humanity 
I feel the desperation of an innocent man
I acknowledge the appreciation of my gift
I determine narration to be lies
I witness the love between mother and son
I loathe drunk drivers
I impose pride for vinyl collection
I depict pain in my son who lost his
Brother
   Kids
     Daddy
I let the lyrics of my spinning disc alter my mood
I experience the gift of empathy to share with a friend.
I receive gratitude for guidance I give to the addicted
I witness the numbing of pain
I accept rewards for my passions
The properties of today will navigate my path in life
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Lamoureux Avatar
April 12, 2019 at 4:01 PM
Congrats on being in the top 100 new poems!
Powell Avatar
April 13, 2019 at 12:13 PM
Thank you. That was the second poem I ever wrote in my life but I am really getting into this. Thanks again.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 8, 2019 at 6:01 PM
A thoughtful and heartfelt first piece. Welcome to the Soup, you will fit in nicely. Hugs Rick.
Edgley Avatar
April 7, 2019 at 1:39 PM
I enjoy this poem. My favorite part was “my observations are my own. They are a product of my realm”. I love that.
Sergi Avatar
April 7, 2019 at 8:09 AM
A beautiful acknowledgement in the course of the day. Great Write,Karen!
Simmons Avatar
March 31, 2019 at 10:15 PM
Peace and God's Blessings to you and yours...A very well thought out and written piece of Art...Respect
Powell Avatar
April 2, 2019 at 11:28 AM
Thank you so much. That means a lot to me.
Williams Avatar
March 31, 2019 at 2:40 PM
A very fulfilling 24 hrs. Congrats on your Feature of the day.
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