24 Hours

24 Hours


My observations are my own,
   They are a product of my realm.
I see good people reveal humanity 
I feel the desperation of an innocent man
I acknowledge the appreciation of my gift
I determine narration to be lies
I witness the love between mother and son
I loathe drunk drivers
I impose pride for vinyl collection
I depict pain in my son who lost his
Brother
   Kids
     Daddy
I let the lyrics of my spinning disc alter my mood
I experience the gift of empathy to share with a friend.
I receive gratitude for guidance I give to the addicted
I witness the numbing of pain
I accept rewards for my passions
The properties of today will navigate my path in life

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 4/12/2019 4:01:00 PM
Congrats on being in the top 100 new poems!
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Karen Powell
Date: 4/13/2019 12:13:00 PM
Thank you. That was the second poem I ever wrote in my life but I am really getting into this. Thanks again.
Date: 4/8/2019 6:01:00 PM
A thoughtful and heartfelt first piece. Welcome to the Soup, you will fit in nicely. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 4/7/2019 1:39:00 PM
I enjoy this poem. My favorite part was “my observations are my own. They are a product of my realm”. I love that.
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Date: 4/7/2019 8:09:00 AM
A beautiful acknowledgement in the course of the day. Great Write,Karen!
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Date: 3/31/2019 10:15:00 PM
Peace and God's Blessings to you and yours...A very well thought out and written piece of Art...Respect
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Karen Powell
Date: 4/2/2019 11:28:00 AM
Thank you so much. That means a lot to me.
Date: 3/31/2019 2:40:00 PM
A very fulfilling 24 hrs. Congrats on your Feature of the day.
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