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24 Hour Darkness

sky black as midnight
clouds move fast as day slides by
light flash in dark sky

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Poet Destroyer A

February 15, 2013 at 5:17 PM

Hello Carol, missing you..., hope you are well... stopping by to say HI!:-) Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. Always~ PD"

Don Munro

February 13, 2013 at 11:04 AM

Just loved this! The imagery reminds me of fantastic lightning storms at night in the Arizona desert! Congrats on selection of the week!

Gail Debole

February 12, 2013 at 5:34 PM

Great imagery. Enjoyed reading!

Funom Makama

June 11, 2012 at 4:24 AM

beautiful!

Kate Moore

November 23, 2011 at 6:52 AM

Lovely flowing poetry. Joy to read this one :) Thank you for my welcome

John Freeman

November 16, 2011 at 12:10 PM

Beautiful Haiku here Carol, Thanks for your appreciated comments. Agape, Moses

Nikita Mitra

October 27, 2011 at 12:28 PM

Lovely. :) keep it up!

Andrea Dietrich

October 27, 2011 at 12:41 AM

I like that line about day sliding by . It goes so well with the moving clouds!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

October 26, 2011 at 9:57 AM

vibrant lines of intensity and imagery Carol .. I luv alliteration in titles ..this one is very impressive my friend..luv to u always..

Black Eyed Susan

October 26, 2011 at 8:40 AM

pretty image. and thanks for your kind comments on my work.

Gwendolen Song

October 26, 2011 at 7:45 AM

Gorgeous images in this haiku, Carol. Poets do seem to be drawn to the sky. Thanks for visiting my latest works...so busy with school...hard to read all my favorite poets' work... Have a great day. Gwendolen

Jack Horne

October 26, 2011 at 7:11 AM

Love this atmospheric piece - thanks for all your kind comments and many congrats on your wins : )

Fabiyas M V

October 26, 2011 at 5:24 AM

It is creating ripples of thoughts in my mind,Caroline.Lovingly,Fab.

George Aul

October 25, 2011 at 1:58 PM

Great picture painted.........George

Bl Devnath

October 25, 2011 at 9:14 AM

Hi! friend, yes, light spark in dusk sky. You find word in word. Nice, thanks for sharing. bl

Sara Kendrick

October 25, 2011 at 8:45 AM

Very descriptive of some days of late..Enjoyed reading very much ...Thanks for stopping by, reading and commenting on my work..Sara

Judy Ball

October 25, 2011 at 6:29 AM

Hmmmmm Sounds like a storm is moving in. I actually like being inside while a good hard rain is falling outside. Nice job here. God Bless, JB

Iolanda Scripca

October 25, 2011 at 3:24 AM

This morning I want to be the one to wish you a great day :0) , dear Carol! I'll be the light sparking in the dusk :) Love, iolanda

Katherine Stella

October 24, 2011 at 5:49 PM

great play on words here carol loved the imagery sounds bewitching too lol also thanks for your kind comments on my works as well keep knocking them out g/f

Don Johnson

October 24, 2011 at 5:16 PM

Sunset shuts the gate on me, but we are here for eternity, great verse Carol, xox

Debbie Duncan

October 24, 2011 at 2:38 PM

very nice,, thank you so much for your comment on my "She Walks" ;} blessings as always !

Joe Maverick

October 24, 2011 at 2:32 PM

pleasure to read you today Carol...

Faleshia Murphy

October 24, 2011 at 2:15 PM

well well well see you are still writing amzing poetry nice one i'll be checking in from time to time so happy to be back miss you so much posted two poems hope you enjoy talk to you soon and thanks so much for caring love ya faleshia