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24 Hour Darkness

sky black as midnight clouds move fast as day slides by light flash in dark sky

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/15/2013 5:17:00 PM

Hello Carol, missing you..., hope you are well... stopping by to say HI!:-) Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. Always~ PD"

Don Munro

Date: 2/13/2013 11:04:00 AM

Just loved this! The imagery reminds me of fantastic lightning storms at night in the Arizona desert! Congrats on selection of the week!

Gail Debole

Date: 2/12/2013 5:34:00 PM

Great imagery. Enjoyed reading!

Funom Makama

Date: 6/11/2012 4:24:00 AM

beautiful!

Kate Moore

Date: 11/23/2011 6:52:00 AM

Lovely flowing poetry. Joy to read this one :) Thank you for my welcome

John Freeman

Date: 11/16/2011 12:10:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku here Carol, Thanks for your appreciated comments. Agape, Moses

Nikita Mitra

Date: 10/27/2011 12:28:00 PM

Lovely. :) keep it up!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/27/2011 12:41:00 AM

I like that line about day sliding by . It goes so well with the moving clouds!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/26/2011 9:57:00 AM

vibrant lines of intensity and imagery Carol .. I luv alliteration in titles ..this one is very impressive my friend..luv to u always..

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 10/26/2011 8:40:00 AM

pretty image. and thanks for your kind comments on my work.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 10/26/2011 7:45:00 AM

Gorgeous images in this haiku, Carol. Poets do seem to be drawn to the sky. Thanks for visiting my latest works...so busy with school...hard to read all my favorite poets' work... Have a great day. Gwendolen

Jack Horne

Date: 10/26/2011 7:11:00 AM

Love this atmospheric piece - thanks for all your kind comments and many congrats on your wins : )

Fabiyas M V

Date: 10/26/2011 5:24:00 AM

It is creating ripples of thoughts in my mind,Caroline.Lovingly,Fab.

George Aul

Date: 10/25/2011 1:58:00 PM

Great picture painted.........George

Bl Devnath

Date: 10/25/2011 9:14:00 AM

Hi! friend, yes, light spark in dusk sky. You find word in word. Nice, thanks for sharing. bl

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/25/2011 8:45:00 AM

Very descriptive of some days of late..Enjoyed reading very much ...Thanks for stopping by, reading and commenting on my work..Sara

Judy Ball

Date: 10/25/2011 6:29:00 AM

Hmmmmm Sounds like a storm is moving in. I actually like being inside while a good hard rain is falling outside. Nice job here. God Bless, JB

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 10/25/2011 3:24:00 AM

This morning I want to be the one to wish you a great day :0) , dear Carol! I'll be the light sparking in the dusk :) Love, iolanda

Katherine Stella

Date: 10/24/2011 5:49:00 PM

great play on words here carol loved the imagery sounds bewitching too lol also thanks for your kind comments on my works as well keep knocking them out g/f

Don Johnson

Date: 10/24/2011 5:16:00 PM

Sunset shuts the gate on me, but we are here for eternity, great verse Carol, xox

Debbie Duncan

Date: 10/24/2011 2:38:00 PM

very nice,, thank you so much for your comment on my "She Walks" ;} blessings as always !

Joe Maverick

Date: 10/24/2011 2:32:00 PM

pleasure to read you today Carol...

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 10/24/2011 2:15:00 PM

well well well see you are still writing amzing poetry nice one i'll be checking in from time to time so happy to be back miss you so much posted two poems hope you enjoy talk to you soon and thanks so much for caring love ya faleshia

Jack Horne

Date: 10/24/2011 1:06:00 PM

such vivid imagery, my friend. Thanks for all your kind comments - and many congrats on your wins too, of course

Sami Helbaoui

Date: 10/24/2011 12:28:00 PM

It's like you're talking about our weather :O this is a very nice Haiku, i loved it. Sami