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24 Hour Darkness

sky black as midnight
clouds move fast as day slides by
light flash in dark sky

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/15/2013 5:17:00 PM
Hello Carol, missing you..., hope you are well... stopping by to say HI!:-) Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. Always~ PD"
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Date: 2/13/2013 11:04:00 AM
Just loved this! The imagery reminds me of fantastic lightning storms at night in the Arizona desert! Congrats on selection of the week!
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Date: 2/12/2013 5:34:00 PM
Great imagery. Enjoyed reading!
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Date: 6/11/2012 4:24:00 AM
beautiful!
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Date: 11/23/2011 6:52:00 AM
Lovely flowing poetry. Joy to read this one :) Thank you for my welcome
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Date: 11/16/2011 12:10:00 PM
Beautiful Haiku here Carol, Thanks for your appreciated comments. Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/27/2011 12:28:00 PM
Lovely. :) keep it up!
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Date: 10/27/2011 12:41:00 AM
I like that line about day sliding by . It goes so well with the moving clouds!
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Date: 10/26/2011 9:57:00 AM
vibrant lines of intensity and imagery Carol .. I luv alliteration in titles ..this one is very impressive my friend..luv to u always..
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Date: 10/26/2011 8:40:00 AM
pretty image. and thanks for your kind comments on my work.
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Date: 10/26/2011 7:45:00 AM
Gorgeous images in this haiku, Carol. Poets do seem to be drawn to the sky. Thanks for visiting my latest works...so busy with school...hard to read all my favorite poets' work... Have a great day. Gwendolen
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Date: 10/26/2011 7:11:00 AM
Love this atmospheric piece - thanks for all your kind comments and many congrats on your wins : )
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Date: 10/26/2011 5:24:00 AM
It is creating ripples of thoughts in my mind,Caroline.Lovingly,Fab.
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Date: 10/25/2011 1:58:00 PM
Great picture painted.........George
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Date: 10/25/2011 9:14:00 AM
Hi! friend, yes, light spark in dusk sky. You find word in word. Nice, thanks for sharing. bl
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Date: 10/25/2011 8:45:00 AM
Very descriptive of some days of late..Enjoyed reading very much ...Thanks for stopping by, reading and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 10/25/2011 6:29:00 AM
Hmmmmm Sounds like a storm is moving in. I actually like being inside while a good hard rain is falling outside. Nice job here. God Bless, JB
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Date: 10/25/2011 3:24:00 AM
This morning I want to be the one to wish you a great day :0) , dear Carol! I'll be the light sparking in the dusk :) Love, iolanda
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Date: 10/24/2011 5:49:00 PM
great play on words here carol loved the imagery sounds bewitching too lol also thanks for your kind comments on my works as well keep knocking them out g/f
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Date: 10/24/2011 5:16:00 PM
Sunset shuts the gate on me, but we are here for eternity, great verse Carol, xox
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Date: 10/24/2011 2:38:00 PM
very nice,, thank you so much for your comment on my "She Walks" ;} blessings as always !
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Date: 10/24/2011 2:32:00 PM
pleasure to read you today Carol...
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Date: 10/24/2011 2:15:00 PM
well well well see you are still writing amzing poetry nice one i'll be checking in from time to time so happy to be back miss you so much posted two poems hope you enjoy talk to you soon and thanks so much for caring love ya faleshia
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Date: 10/24/2011 1:06:00 PM
such vivid imagery, my friend. Thanks for all your kind comments - and many congrats on your wins too, of course
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Date: 10/24/2011 12:28:00 PM
It's like you're talking about our weather :O this is a very nice Haiku, i loved it. Sami
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