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21 Feather Fans

Burlesque dancer Cher
feathers perfectly placed
falling on her face
fans strewn everywhere

Written 17th March 2019

Contest: 21 Syllables
Sponsor: Kevin Shaw

Copyright © Ann Gilmour | Year Posted 2019

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March 18, 2019 at 2:31 PM

Great Rhyme, Ann, good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve ~`*

March 18, 2019 at 4:11 PM

Many thanks to you Eve, kindest thoughts Ann xx

March 18, 2019 at 12:09 PM

Very nice Ann :) Have a nice day!

March 18, 2019 at 2:02 PM

Thank you so much Heidi. Kindest thoughts Ann xx

March 18, 2019 at 10:45 AM

Oh a lovely pen; beautiful imagery.

March 18, 2019 at 2:04 PM

I am so glad you like it ML and thanks for your lovely comments. Kindest thoughts Ann xx

Caren Krutsinger

March 17, 2019 at 7:42 PM

Twenty-one syllables, placed strategically. Nice one, my friend!

March 17, 2019 at 7:48 PM

Haha, yes I wanted to use the word strategically, but that made 22 syllables, so perfectly had to suffice. Thanks Caren, kindest thoughts Ann xx

March 17, 2019 at 5:55 PM

oh so clever Ann! good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

March 17, 2019 at 6:38 PM

Thanks Jan, though took a great deal of pruning to get 21 syllables and still make any sense, Haha. Kindest thoughts Ann xx

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