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21 Feather Fans

Burlesque dancer Cher feathers perfectly placed falling on her face fans strewn everywhere Written 17th March 2019 Contest: 21 Syllables Sponsor: Kevin Shaw

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Eve Roper

Date: 3/18/2019 2:31:00 PM

Great Rhyme, Ann, good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve ~`*

Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/18/2019 4:11:00 PM

Many thanks to you Eve, kindest thoughts Ann xx

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/18/2019 12:09:00 PM

Very nice Ann :) Have a nice day!

Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/18/2019 2:02:00 PM

Thank you so much Heidi. Kindest thoughts Ann xx

M. L. Kiser

Date: 3/18/2019 10:45:00 AM

Oh a lovely pen; beautiful imagery.

Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/18/2019 2:04:00 PM

I am so glad you like it ML and thanks for your lovely comments. Kindest thoughts Ann xx

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/17/2019 7:42:00 PM

Twenty-one syllables, placed strategically. Nice one, my friend!

Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/17/2019 7:48:00 PM

Haha, yes I wanted to use the word strategically, but that made 22 syllables, so perfectly had to suffice. Thanks Caren, kindest thoughts Ann xx

Jan Allison

Date: 3/17/2019 5:55:00 PM

oh so clever Ann! good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/17/2019 6:38:00 PM

Thanks Jan, though took a great deal of pruning to get 21 syllables and still make any sense, Haha. Kindest thoughts Ann xx