Get Your Premium Membership

20 Love Poems and a Song of Despair

the man who lied to me knew that immortality is the best kind of lie that pain is closer to the soul than happiness secrets known only by the old watchmakers and the erudite antiquarians men who lie read every book with their fingers they know that leaves are the plaits of virgins unwounded with bloody hands on the cross and letters are the thorns within the heart of every Laura betrothed for ever nevermore a wife only the sea is for the whales’ fishermen old whore with hair on her chin the only true men who learn the salty taste of death at daybreak

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/2/2014 2:48:00 PM
Hi Cristina, well, WOW, not what I was expecting. Love the salty ending taste. 20 songs, wow! What a way to live, and wake up to nothing... I like your composition, free verse, happens to be the only style I'm good at. Everything was darkly beautiful and captivating, and at the same time sad, when pains the only note playing at times... hugs... love this.. Linda
Login to Reply
Moldoveanu Avatar
Cristina M Moldoveanu
Date: 4/3/2014 8:38:00 AM
I agree with you Linda, it is quite sad, but life is 99% suffering, isn't it? I am not quite sure if this is genuine free verse but this is how I qualify all my poems...maybe with a touch of postmodernism. Thanks for your comprehensive reviews. Love and peace, Cristina

Book: Reflection on the Important Things