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202 5

cheerful sun
lovely moon
swinging
bruised earth
anew

earthfree verse

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Brian Sambourne

February 5, 2025 at 9:21 AM

A very effective turn in your poem, Thriveni. As a reader, I enjoy an unexpected shift in a poem, and yours is very well done indeed. Best wishes.

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 7, 2025 at 1:38 AM

- New start ... 2025 ... best wishes :) - hugs

thriveni c mysore

January 7, 2025 at 5:39 AM

New start it is dear poet friend. Thank you for the blessings and hugs. Happiness be yours dear friend, thank you.

Joe Maverick

January 6, 2025 at 5:18 AM

May the bruises be healed Thriveni' And May God Bless your days!

thriveni c mysore

January 7, 2025 at 5:38 AM

Thank you for the kind visit and blessings dear poet friend. May mother Earth's bruises be healed, Amen. You bring so much hopes, thank you.

Marilene Evans

January 5, 2025 at 11:31 PM

Nicely done. The sun and the moon promise a new day, a new beginning.

thriveni c mysore

January 6, 2025 at 2:09 AM

Thank you so much for your kind visit dear poet friend. Yes Nature promises us a new beginning. Sad we take it for granted. thanks again.

David Crandall

January 5, 2025 at 8:25 PM

This has a positive, hopeful ring to me. In my mind, I see the celestial father and mother of the baby new year earth, in need of care.

thriveni c mysore

January 6, 2025 at 2:05 AM

'celestial father and mother' they are dear poet. I just experimented with the title, parents swinging by the child 202 wherein the five elements are kaput. Nature is too generous. your kind visit brings me joy dear friend, thank you.