2020 Hindsight

God did not like messing with clay
And found there was another way
Then Eve did her best
Promoting incest
And what a mess we're in today!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Devonshire Avatar
December 28, 2020 at 8:46 AM
Rico, I once asked the nuns at school: "How did civilization go on if Adam and Eve only had three sons?" She laughed and said, they had many children. Then I asked: "So brothers and sisters married each other?" She had no answer for that. LOL Great limerick, my friend! Missing you, but having fun with my sister. Love, Carolyn
Leffanta Avatar
December 28, 2020 at 10:14 AM
Nuns don't like little girls who ask questions! Just believe what you are told! Aloha! Rico
Laurie Avatar
December 27, 2020 at 7:29 PM
Hello Rico … is this taught to the kids in Sunday school. I think not Rico - Lindsay
Leffanta Avatar
December 28, 2020 at 10:13 AM
Now you know why the scriptures were buried in clay pots! Aloha! Rico
Wolf Avatar
December 27, 2020 at 6:30 PM
Love this spoof of 'the first marriage.' No wonder we're all screwed up! :) gw
Leffanta Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 10:14 AM
Marriage is just legal title to property and Adam could not own Eve as she was part of him, right? Aloha! Rico
Rose  Avatar
December 27, 2020 at 5:13 PM
lol very insightful and funny Rico, hope you had a great xmas.
Leffanta Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 10:17 AM
Christmas is for watching children open their presents and my children are too old, but I trust you enjoyed yours! Aloha! Rico
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 27, 2020 at 11:49 AM
Heaven’s banjos are plucking! Giggles galore ~xomo
Leffanta Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 10:15 AM
So angels are still pulling strings? Aloha! Rico
Allison Avatar
December 27, 2020 at 9:40 AM
ha ha ha we sure are in a mess in the world. Season's greetings Rico I hope you will continue to bring a smile to us with your witty words:-) hugs jan xx
Leffanta Avatar
December 27, 2020 at 9:56 AM
Everyone yearns for the "freedom" of 21, so see you there! Aloha 'oe! Rico
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