1st Love

love the haiku form
especially because I 
love numbers so much

the words are just a
means to the end of counting
obsessed I admit

OH! and odd numbers
only way to go from the 
address, pay @ pump etc
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K. Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 3:32 AM
Very unique take and insight on the contest, Kristi :) congrats!! -- nikko :)
Dietrich Avatar
October 5, 2010 at 8:30 PM
Cute idea, Krist, Congratulations. Luv, Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
October 5, 2010 at 3:00 PM
Congrats Kristi on your win in the Haiku contest with this cool write.. enjoyed as u enjoy your win with luv..
A   Avatar
October 5, 2010 at 12:46 PM
Kristi, Congratulations and thanks for supporting my contest. I had lots of fun running this contest,.p.d.
Roberts Avatar
October 5, 2010 at 12:42 PM
great entry, congrats on your win in the contest
Brown Avatar
October 5, 2010 at 12:19 PM
Congratulations Kristi on your win in P.D.'s contest *Going Haiku Crazy*. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
October 5, 2010 at 12:18 PM
Congratulations on this well mdeserved win, kristi,
Roberts Avatar
September 27, 2010 at 9:58 AM
cute one Kristi, much enjoyed
A  Avatar
September 27, 2010 at 7:24 AM
KRISTI, YOU ARE A GENIUS! CAN I CALL YOU A HAIKU ATTIC, KIDDING. LOVE YOUR AMAZING, WONDERFUL HAIKU! HAVE A BLESSED DAY*luv~SKAT
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