1 I Have Seen

1} I have seen

full moon 
Japanese lantern floats
above an
 azure sea

in my left hand 
a paper dragon
folded with love 
and wonder

in my right hand
crane about to fly
wings agape
filled with wind

from China comes the
blow of lift into a waiting
sky with lights, firecracker 
hopes, from the prayerful

I do not know their names 
but dragon and crane
what magic they hold 
or why they came

to my mind  this trembling night
freedom rolls a thunderous clap  
they leap from my hands
and open the trap.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Breedt Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 11:55 PM
I agree its another fantastic write. If this is what pain causes to create then its worth the torment - almost. You see more with one eye than other with both seeing, but blinded. Your muse is out there. Firecracker hopes-what a line
Ellison Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 8:38 PM
WOW!!!!!!!!!!! No other comment necessary! xxx Jack
Cresswell Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 9:37 PM
Thank you Jack.
Sergi Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 6:28 PM
What a wondrous poetic asian scene! I wish I was there, Pat. Great Write!
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