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1 I Have Seen

1} I have seen full moon Japanese lantern floats above an azure sea in my left hand a paper dragon folded with love and wonder in my right hand crane about to fly wings agape filled with wind from China comes the blow of lift into a waiting sky with lights, firecracker hopes, from the prayerful I do not know their names but dragon and crane what magic they hold or why they came to my mind this trembling night freedom rolls a thunderous clap they leap from my hands and open the trap.

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Date: 9/17/2017 11:55:00 PM
I agree its another fantastic write. If this is what pain causes to create then its worth the torment - almost. You see more with one eye than other with both seeing, but blinded. Your muse is out there. Firecracker hopes-what a line
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Date: 9/17/2017 8:38:00 PM
WOW!!!!!!!!!!! No other comment necessary! xxx Jack
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/17/2017 9:37:00 PM
Thank you Jack.
Date: 9/17/2017 6:28:00 PM
What a wondrous poetic asian scene! I wish I was there, Pat. Great Write!
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