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In like a storm Swept me up with her love Now she's just a shadow Of a girl that once was I wonder I wonder What have I done What happened to the summer days Playing in the sun I she knows that she's the one The one I think of Day and night The one I can't forget My love my light

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Jerry Bolton

Date: 6/1/2014 8:27:00 AM

Oh, you may never forget her, but you will move on and allow her to dim in your memory. If not, you will spend many years writing about her and sabotaging your heart.

T.Nicole Williams

Date: 5/30/2014 2:12:00 PM

Your poetry is beautiful and full of heart! Nicole

Diane Christian

Date: 5/27/2014 7:22:00 AM

beautiful written, so full of love so welle xpressed,

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/23/2014 1:50:00 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, A.W. :) - I choose your first great written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ettie Christian-Bowling

Date: 5/22/2014 7:30:00 PM

Nice poem-Love Ettie

Faye Gibson

Date: 5/22/2014 5:20:00 PM

Hello. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I have found a wonderful community of supportive people here. Comment on the poems of other members and most will return the favor. Hope you find much enjoyment.

James Hyler

Date: 5/22/2014 11:10:00 AM

Thank you for sharing :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/22/2014 8:38:00 AM

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Skat A

Date: 5/21/2014 11:09:00 PM

a delightful poem... AN..., Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen

Date: 5/21/2014 10:45:00 PM

Good 1

Benjamin Godwin Zaki
Date: 5/30/2014 7:50:00 AM

I find this poem full of love. A great poem it indeed is.