1975

1975

we sat silently on the porch

I was outta breath from running
children ran in those days
some of us would wait on the porch for the sky to stop

I was wearing a light blue jacket
you were on my arm 
we watched the sun calculate its position
and the sound of the pretzel man returning

watching you on my arm watching me

 alone

digging up the bones of birds I buried last week
carrying my clipboard 
sketches
of the newly planted trees
who's leaves were stars

I had markers, pens, pencils and chalk

all the time

I was so thin then
when the days of our lives would drag on
and the gravity of summers would destroy time passing
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Johnson-Saunders Avatar
January 21, 2012 at 4:48 PM
Congrats, Robert! Great poem. It takes me back to a simpler time. I was born in 1972 and remember when children played outside, exploring and using their imaginations. No computers or video games! Like you, I could be outside for hours just discovering the world. Kids today miss out on that kind of freedom. Thanks for the trip down memory lane. Blessings, Rhonda :)
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January 22, 2012 at 9:31 PM
Thanks! Rhonda :)
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January 18, 2012 at 3:30 AM
Congratulations on your win :)
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January 18, 2012 at 4:44 AM
thanks
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January 17, 2012 at 7:29 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Robert. Love, Carol P.S. you can find the featured poets down the center of PoetrySoup Homepage. There are 4 pages of them this week and you can click and read and leave comments to the other poets. The poems are changed around each day giving your poem more exposure. The poems are up from Sunday to the next Sunday
Sciasci Avatar
January 17, 2012 at 7:31 AM
oh wow thats great Thanks!!
Mister Roboto Avatar
January 15, 2012 at 10:04 PM
I am fortunate to have read this one today! The year BEFORE I was born (1976), but still, I DiG IT!
Sciasci Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 5:26 AM
thanks!
Roberts Avatar
August 12, 2010 at 7:52 AM
lovely write
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