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18th century love

Romanticize a scene it falls in endless dreams begin and then you see that what it is is all it will ever be crimson petals in a vase lace curtains rise, open windows open eyes kisses soft whispers cannot compete of how delicate a moment is with you leaves drop onto the ground cold cobblestones dusk drops upon us melting on our tongues such is Autumn until the second we must part I'll hold you tight here in the dark

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Date: 3/13/2020 12:03:00 AM
A Good poem
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Nancy Beckman
Date: 4/13/2020 8:25:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 11/5/2018 2:58:00 PM
Very romantic and dreamy. I love 18th century stories/movies etc. A very pleasurable read, Nancy.
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Nancy Beckman
Date: 11/5/2018 6:10:00 PM
Thank you, Carole!
Date: 10/17/2018 8:43:00 AM
A very lyrical and romantic write you have offered us. This is beautiful, I really like this. What a wonderfully expressive piece.
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Nancy Beckman
Date: 10/17/2018 9:13:00 PM
Thank you! I wanted to write about fall without writing about leaves falling, changing colors, blah, blah, blah lol. I started off with a romantic piece and it let me put a sliver of fall awe in it :)
Date: 10/9/2018 12:07:00 PM
Nice romantic verse Nancy.
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Nancy Beckman
Date: 10/12/2018 7:42:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 10/9/2018 10:10:00 AM
This was beautiful and definitely romantic. Nicely done
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Nancy Beckman
Date: 10/12/2018 7:42:00 PM
Thank you!