Get Your Premium Membership

16 Year Old Me

You used to be alive
More alive than the life that surrounded you
Blinded by their lies
That blood ain't thick anymore 


The apologies don't fit the new frame
Time is god and you ain't wise to praise it
The free neptunian been tricking you
I'll send you a love letter from Saturn soon...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/23/2020 11:29:00 PM
This is a very well written poem. I really appreciate it.. :) well Could I request you to visit my website & read my poem? thank you..
Login to Reply
Date: 1/20/2020 12:39:00 AM
last three lines amazingly written; great expression; like it
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things