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Taped to my desk are fifteen hearts on white construction paper my daughter colored with full confidence I’d keep my promise we’d finish together next time. They were to be flower petals. That one sheet of paper, blossoming innocent love, has twice saved my life; provided strength to fight for her and keep my promise when I’d given up. Because of her, this humble father, full of breath, writes; for matters such - devices render trite. 75 words - 2/28/2017

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Date: 3/6/2017 10:55:00 AM
This is wonderful. you have once again produced another masterpiece which is a true testament of your reputation in this wonderful community. Thanks a lot for the share.
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Date: 2/28/2017 7:51:00 PM
Beautiful. I hope you will get to finish that flower together some day.
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Date: 2/28/2017 5:05:00 AM
This is beautiful, Phillip, keep up the hope and keep writing:) I do remember you in my prayers:)
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Date: 2/28/2017 2:26:00 AM
That day WILL come, where you will finish that flower, together. Unti that day all these hearts speak of love. Such wonderful loving poem this is.
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Date: 2/28/2017 2:09:00 AM
This so sweet Phillip
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