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You sweet, tender, immortal fifteen Caught up in wonderful delusions Fearlessly staring life in the face Facing your future without remorse Do not sleep away your innocence Age will slip quietly through your door You will awaken to find yourself Longing for all your youthful passions created 2/17/2011

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Date: 3/18/2021 7:14:00 PM
I liked your poem very much. I do think you meant "innocence" instead of "innocents" in line 5? It sort of stopped me in my tracks. Best wishes in your poetry writing.
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