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Skating On Thin Ice

1440

A skater went out on a lake that’s thin,
And wore a smile on her talented chin.
She spun like a top,
And then had to stop,
As she fell through and got soaked to the skin.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Dietrich Avatar
January 27, 2026 at 10:26 PM
Cute one!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
January 28, 2026 at 11:11 AM
Thanks.
Goldsmith Avatar
January 18, 2026 at 11:52 AM
Your "1440" is a fun Limerick read. Great picture you have here. "Good Luck" If for a contest. Have a lovely day/week writing away.................
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
January 19, 2026 at 12:25 AM
Thank you, my friend.
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