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Image result for pictures of electric meters spinning

1429

charcoal gray skies
not quite cold enough to snow....
power meter spins

winterhaiku

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Andrea Dietrich

December 5, 2025 at 9:32 PM

Nicely done, Sara

Sara Kendrick

December 6, 2025 at 9:45 AM

Thank you, Andrea. I appreciate the kind review of my work. I guess it is really a mix between a Haiku and Senryu. Sara K

Howard Kerr

December 4, 2025 at 12:26 AM

Sara, This haiku is a practical, common sense, intelligent work which doesn’t sacrifice colour or imagination. Truly excellent. Thanks for your recent visit to my page Howard

Sara Kendrick

December 4, 2025 at 4:00 AM

Your high praise is uplifting, Howard. I enjoy your visits and comments. Sara K

Valsa George

December 3, 2025 at 8:11 PM

This is an impressive haiku with two realistic images. There are stark variations in climate these days. All the best dear Sara.

Sara Kendrick

December 4, 2025 at 4:00 AM

Thank you, Valsa. We are having cold, and the meter is spinning as the heat pump comes on, but not cold enough or conditions just right for snow. We don't handle snow very well in the south since we don't have it very often. Your visit is delightful. Sara K

sara Etgen-Baker

December 3, 2025 at 7:09 AM

outstanding, Sara K. ours is spinning out of control as well, hug, Sara B

Sara Kendrick

December 3, 2025 at 5:32 PM

I am sure you are wondering as I am, Sara B. How much will this bill be next month when it comes to roost in our lap. Sara K

Sotto Poet

December 3, 2025 at 6:04 AM

Well-composed Haiku, Sara. Many emotional cores in just a few words.

Sara Kendrick

December 3, 2025 at 5:31 PM

Lasaad, I am sure you are familiar of the power or gas meter spinning. The wondering as to how much it will cost to stay warm or cool this month. Sara K