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Poem written for and submitted to "1424 Haiku" poetry contest, Brian Strand, sponsor, November 4, 2025

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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ interlunar spiders weave dew-strung galaxies strobing moth surrenders~ dusk feasts on silver regrets
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Andresen Avatar
November 6, 2025 at 5:17 AM
- Very beautiful, Sara :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 7, 2025 at 7:30 AM
thank you!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 7:40 AM
Beautiful rendering. I enjoyed it very much, Aloha William.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 7, 2025 at 7:31 AM
many thanks, kind sir
Kendrick Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 3:27 AM
Great wording and creative way to go with an entry. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 7, 2025 at 7:31 AM
thanks for your kind comments, Sara K
Buhagiar Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 1:47 AM
Hi Sara, you weave a great poem. Loved your picture too. Best for a win.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 7, 2025 at 7:31 AM
awww, thank you Victor
Vaso Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 12:39 AM
Beautiful, is funny I haven't posted here but just wrote a spider poem!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 7, 2025 at 7:31 AM
good for you...will look for it
Gauthier Avatar
November 4, 2025 at 9:23 PM
Beautiful ~ are you sure Brian will accept this 4-liner 7-5-6-7 as a haiku?
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 7, 2025 at 7:32 AM
not sure but gave it a try :-)
Wolf Avatar
November 4, 2025 at 8:26 PM
'silver regrets' moved and moves me. Excelsior! :) gw
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 7, 2025 at 7:32 AM
awww, I'm grateful
Jones Avatar
November 4, 2025 at 8:10 PM
Love that creative line “dew strung galaxies”! Good luck in the contest Sara!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 7, 2025 at 7:32 AM
many thanks, Karen
Hind Avatar
November 4, 2025 at 3:30 PM
Gorgeous - ,3
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 7, 2025 at 7:33 AM
aww, thank you <3
Rolland Avatar
November 4, 2025 at 3:10 PM
delicious, like a "spider" you have captured beauty, enjoyed a lot
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 7, 2025 at 7:33 AM
wow, what kind and encouraging words
Kauffman Avatar
November 4, 2025 at 1:36 PM
Sara, there is such a mystical, lunar quality about this haiku. Love your imagery - of course I do! Best wishes for the contest. Hugs and blessings!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 7, 2025 at 7:34 AM
wow, Sara K, I appreciate your lovely comments. you made my day, hugs, Sara B
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