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he checks his phone screen
after each whispered prayer,
hoping God replies
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Alhemaidy Avatar
November 8, 2025 at 1:23 PM
Best hope lovely poetess :-)) Very nice 5/7/5 poem! Have a wonderful day ~ hugs AA
Peranteau Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 2:22 PM
did he crack thuh screen ') ... can yuh believe, i'm still developing in literature dear poet....though primarily in modern English, thuh noun "prayer"; a one syllable werd, can, for rhythmic use in literature, be a 2syllable werd...ty for the learn....much love
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 30, 2025 at 6:23 PM
just lovely! I think I should check my cellphone! thanks for the idea :-)
Leake Avatar
October 29, 2025 at 11:33 AM
Nice Senryu Rowena Enjoyed this Best wishes Kevin
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