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Poem written for and submitted to "1423 Senyru" poetry contest, Brian Strand, sponsor, October 26, 2025.

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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ buttercream sky melts~ ‘Take a load off,’ the lake hums. his net, full of dusk
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Jones Avatar
October 26, 2025 at 6:04 PM
You capture the mood and ambiance well with word! Good luck in the contest.
Hind Avatar
October 26, 2025 at 5:55 PM
This seems to have a current beneath. So breathtaking, I really loved the last line.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 26, 2025 at 6:01 PM
thank you, Paige....for seeing the subtle current and for appreciating my words. hugs, Sara
Alhemaidy Avatar
October 26, 2025 at 3:37 PM
Very nice poem! On time, good time for fishing :-) Good luck!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 26, 2025 at 6:00 PM
as my dad always said, "Always a good time to go fishin'."
Andresen Avatar
October 26, 2025 at 12:16 PM
- A wonderful moment you have captured, Sara :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 26, 2025 at 6:00 PM
thanks, Anne-Lise---appreciate your visit and encouragement, Texas hugs, Sar a
Gauthier Avatar
October 26, 2025 at 11:05 AM
Charming ~ beautiful
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 26, 2025 at 6:00 PM
thanks!
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